Noah Explains

                          BREAKING NEWS New word from bystanders witness a video camera suddenly appear out of the ground. The people were looking in its direction, looked away for a second, then the camera appeared. The camera was sent to a place that fixes cameras and finds what is recorded in them. The footage they found is shown here:

Today was the day. It was Escape Day, not an actual day named by the community of Tholothia, but it was a day named by a certain citizen, Mike Schmidt. Tholothia was a dystopian country, owned by StarHorrors. StarHorrors was the king's nickname; his real name was unknown. Mike just about had it with being under surveillance for every millisecond of his entire life. The word "privacy" was not a word mentioned in Tholothia. Not that the word "privacy" is a forbidden word, it just means there is none of that there. The MTF units were holding their MP40s, all locked and loaded, looking through peoples' windows, while marching on the sidewalks. What felt like trillions of surveillance cameras were activated twenty-four hours a day, keeping an eye on every moving object, even the flying leaves get detected. Although being packed and ready to escape, Mike stared outside his window, thinking about what where he was going to go when free. His thoughts were interrupte...

Summary: Zaid's Dytopia was about a city being under complete surveillance by the government, using robot tracker birds; birds that have cameras for heads. They recharge by sitting on cables outside (which was my favourite part). They go to your windows and follow you around so they can monitor everything you're doing. Commendation: Creativity was on-point, there were a lot of details about the tracker bird, to let us know how the robot birds actually work. A major creativity point was mixing real-life things with fictional things, just like how real birds sit on wires or cables. The robot ones sit on it so they can recharge. The creativity also had sci-fi in it (my favorite genre). It makes you think, who created them? Scientists? Did they create it for the government? Or did the government itSELF create them? And for tracker birds to circle around an entire city, how did they have TIME to make all of them? And are they still making them? Some subheadings were implemented, in ...